Love Came Down

By: Kolton

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DATE SUBMITTED

4/15/2013

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TROY - 4/18/2013 12:17:53 PM

Kolton, other than making crosses, I don't know why the middle of the W would go up like that. Also, you may check the color of that part. It appears to be a tad off in both images. As for what Nate mentioned, can the kerning be adjusted there, to eliminate the overlaps? Very clean and professional mock up. Looks like you can order it today!


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Nate - 4/17/2013 2:46:44 PM

Where the "a" and "m" merge you can tell it a font. I'd try to tighten up the way they merge. Same with the "o" and "w". Have you thought about hand drawing this one? think it'd improve it a lot. As it stands, it's not bad by any stretch though.


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Kolton
contributing since 7/19/2010
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