yeah, as a young designer i'm sure it's tempting to download all these crazy fonts, but let me encourage you to stay far away from them.
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Welcome Jon. I agree with Aaron on the font choices. On a positive note, this mockup is much better than your previous submissions.
Hey Jon, "Bleeding Cowboys" font along with your "Birth of a Hero" font are two of the most overused fonts right now. To have some originality try to steer clear of these fonts. It will help you stand out more. As far as the design itself, I would drop the "For Christ" below "Living." I read it right now as "For Christ Living"