Rieon, I think the addition of the word "Pray" instead of "Nike" is overkill. It makes it wordy and doesn't fit the rest of the text or theme. "Jesus Did It" would be enough to get the parody with "just do it." The line "once and for all" would be smaller and optional. It comes from the verse and the scripture reference is not necessary here. I'm looking forward to the remix! Post it to the forum first.
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Troy, friends, do you think i can also change the word Nike to Pray, or will be it be excessive to add on top of the Jesus Did It and Once and for all tag? :)
wow Troy, thank you for that valuable input! :) i also like the Jesus Did It sound. :) i'll see what i can do!
I like troy's rephrase. "Jesus Did It". I'd totally rock it.
This image is what prompted that thought: http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/029/b/0/__Just_do_it___Blooden_Nike_by_Qubsik.jpg If you can add some blood without going gross or graphic, it may add to the realism. I know, like how do you add blood drops tastefully? But, you get the idea.
Rieon, here's a thought... Use a railroad spike in place of the Nike swoosh. http://farm9.static.flickr.com/8026/7609384928_01764f2b54.jpg
Of course, rotate it 90 degrees to make it like the swoosh.
and then maybe change the wording to: "Jesus Did It" You could add "Once and for all." (small text) You could also add Hebrews 10:10 as the reference or leave it off.
i'll reupload my second version later, it got denied. lol.
i think it needs another step in there somewhere. there's not enough of a nod to nike.