Hungry?

By: Ashley T

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DATE SUBMITTED

1/22/2013

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4 Jesus answered, “It is written: ‘Man shall not live on bread alone, but on every word that comes from the mouth of God.’[b]” Matthew 4:4 :)
Created2Create - 2/11/2013 5:06:32 PM

I wish the satisfies thing was right under the Word of God part, but still 4/5 :D


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Ashley T - 1/23/2013 1:47:38 PM

Thanks for the feedback Troy! I didn't want it to be exactly how Snicker's does it, but i will take all of your points under consideration. I was debating on the placement of "satisfies" & thanks for the feedback!


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TROY - 1/23/2013 12:08:49 PM

The line "Satisfies" and the verse could come up just below the "Word of God". You may also consider adding "It satisfies." I know Snickers doesn't add the "It", but they usually don't put both the "Hungry" line with the "Satisfies" line, as you have here. Also, the question mark should be the same size as the rest of the line.


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Ashley T
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