I just googled "Tom Neal's Mockup Kit"
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It's not harsh at all. I'm new to clothing design so all input is helpful. I actually didn't know there was a second mock up kit. where is that at?
This is well made, but right now there's nothing that jumps out at me and says, "buy me!" You've done well, but you haven't blown my mind. It's a good start, but I want to push you on past what you've done here. Also, I really recommend Tom Neal's Mock up Kit version 2. A good mock up like that really helps add realism to your design. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with this design. It's just that the strength of the design does not fit the strength of the message and vice versa. Sorry if that sounds harsh, I just want to give my opinion. I've found that the critique forum helps me as well.
Awesome simple but speaks volumes.