jeremiah 31:35

By: davidjnoe

CANVAS Designs Submission

DATE SUBMITTED

8/19/2013

COMMENTS

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Jeremiah 31:35 "Thus says the Lord, who gives the sun for light by day and the fixed order of the moon and the stars for light by night, who stirs up the sea so that its waves roar— the Lord of hosts is his name"
davidgrindpants - 9/4/2013 8:59:25 AM

needs a little work on the font and it would be great! ^^


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Jordan*Hester - 8/22/2013 10:49:11 PM

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- 8/22/2013 7:43:18 PM

i, for one, love photo tees when they're done right. this does need some work though. it's mocked up way too big. it's almost all the way to the shoulder seams. take any shirt of yours and put it down flat and ask yourself if you could see the print actually being that big. also, look at other photo tees. none of them are printed that big. here are examples: http://www.swell.com/Mens-Tees/ALTRU-LIFE-TEPEE-SS-TEE?cs=OR http://www.swell.com/Mens-Tees/FREEDOM-ARTISTS-FADED?cs=WH http://www.swell.com/Mens-Tees/TAVIK-DIMENTED-SS-TEE?cs=WH the other thing that needs work is the typography. it's an overused free grunge font. i'd pick a clean classic sans serif such as helvetica, futura, avant garde, etc. for this one. or if you want something more trendy and stylized, these styles are super popular right now: http://www.tendollarfonts.com/alpine/ hope that helps.


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andrewgupta - 8/22/2013 8:03:56 AM

My aim is not to be harsh, but I don't a picture with a scripture on it reflects the type of creativity that's common Canvas.


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davidjnoe
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