Thanks for the comment. Your idea is noted. God Bless! \
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In my opinion I think you are headed in the right direction. I like your shapes and maybe even the font, but there is to much contrast with the world in the background. It takes away from the message and the font. Also I had to look twice to see the water droplet. It might look better on a white shirt.
I think you are headed in the right direction. With a few adjustments I think you will have a great submission!