Thank you Jimmy! I appreciate your thought here! This design can be printed on one color too easily as you see on the background. I will make it a one color design just to put it out here and see what happens.
Thank you for the suggestion and much love to you too man.
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This is definitely done well Johny. You are a skilled designer and it shows. You've brought about a 3 color design with 2 colors, you know what you're do'n.. :o) An Organization like this is probably gonna be think'n as inexpensive as possible; e.g. ..1 screen..1 color..least expensive tee's because of large shirt runs. Bring about a 2 color with 1 and you're probably gonna stand a better chance. :o) Love ya!
Yes man I get it! I think those comments are useful and helpful. So don't worry I can take it! It's all for the better!!
no worries. the thing is.... i could critique anything and everything no matter how good or bad it is. i think there should be a balance between always wanted to make things better, and knowing when it's good enough for release, so keep that in mind. nothing i say is implying that the design isn't good enough. just suggestions, that's all.
Thanks Corey!!! Don't take this as a bad thing, but... This from you means a LOT! I noticed that you are very demanding and you have an eye for the detail. So I appreciate this comment. And your suggestion is not a bad idea!
God bless you man.
not bad by any means. i hate that one of the requirements is to put the website on there. no one is going to go to the website because they saw it on a shirt but oh well. i do think "for" is a bit distracting in the center, and it MIGHT look better is "water for life" was all together on the top arch and the 3 droplets were on the bottom. but i could be wrong. just a thought. "for" just seems a bit of an afterthought.